Lesson
4
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Peer Review of Diary Entries About Optimism

Grade

Grade 6

UNIT

1

Optimism

Last Updated:

June 10, 2025

In Unit 1, Lesson 4, “Peer Review of Diary Entries About Optimism,” students will participate in a peer review of 3 classmates’ diary entries. Students will write a one-page peer review letter for each student in their group and participate in respectful discussions where they share the successful aspects of their classmates’ writing and provide constructive feedback for revision.

SUGGESTED TIME:

1 class period for students to read their peer review group’s writings and write a peer review letter for each classmate (letters they don’t complete in class can be finished as homework); 1 class period for peer review workshops

RELATED SUBJECT:

English Language Arts

LEARNING OUTCOMES:

  • Read classmate’s writing and write a one-page peer review letter to develop assessment and constructive feedback skills 
  • Engage in collaborative discussions with peers, following guidelines for collegial discussions
  • Review the key ideas expressed and demonstrate understanding of multiple perspectives through reflection and paraphrasing

REQUIRED MATERIALS:

ELA COMMON CORE STANDARDS MET

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.6.1

Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.6.1.B

Follow rules for collegial discussions, set specific goals and deadlines, and define individual roles as needed.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.6.1.C

Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.6.1.D

Review the key ideas expressed and demonstrate understanding of multiple perspectives through reflection and paraphrasing.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.6.4

Present claims and findings, sequencing ideas logically and using pertinent descriptions, facts, and details to accentuate main ideas or themes; use appropriate eye contact, adequate volume, and clear pronunciation.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.6.6

Adapt speech to a variety of contexts and tasks, demonstrating command of formal English when indicated or appropriate.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.L.6.1

Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.6.5

With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.6.10

Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences

CHARACTER AND SOCIAL EMOTIONAL (CSED) NATIONAL STANDARDS MET

Intellectual Character B2

Practice and receive feedback on the ability to be an “active listener”

Intellectual Character B4

Compare and contrast perspectives and defend a position

Self-Awareness A1

Describe how different thoughts, situations, and behaviors affect your feelings and emotions

Self-Awareness A2

Recognize your “stress moments” and why you feel anxious in these situations

Self-Awareness A3

Recognize the different physical cues that emerge during your reaction to negative emotions and stress (e.g., voice volume, tonal quality, shallow/rapid breathing, crossed arms, facial distortions, sweating)

Self-Awareness A4

Describe the techniques you use to challenge or refute your negative thoughts and feelings

Self-Awareness A5

Recognize the times when you exaggerate the severity or consequences of mistakes, embarrassing moments, failures, rejections and other negative events (e.g., “I can never face them again.” “Everyone thinks I’m stupid.”)

Self-Awareness A6

List and explain the different external supports you have used when feeling stressed or anxious (e.g., family, friends, teachers, neighbors)

Self-Awareness A7

Recognize situations that impair your judgment, make you unhappy, or lead you to engage in self-defeating, unhealthy, unethical or illegal conduct

Self-Management A1

Explain one technique you use to stay confident in stressful or challenging situations (e.g. positive self-talk)

Self-Management A3

Explain how you practice “self-care” (e.g., meditation, listening to music, hobby)

Self-Management A4

Explain a time when you overcame a negative thought and developed a “growth mindset”

Social-Awareness A1

Experience and demonstrate empathy

Social-Awareness A3

Demonstrate respect for other people’s opinions and perspectives

Social-Awareness A5

Practice “perspective taking” as a strategy to strengthen your acceptance of others

Social-Awareness A6

Demonstrate awareness and understanding that despite differences, all people have similar needs, feelings and wants

Interpersonal/ Relationship Skills A1

Recognize and monitor how your facial expressions, body language, and tone impact your interactions with others

Interpersonal/ Relationship Skills A5

Understand and practice positive collaboration and cooperation skills (e.g., teamwork)

Responsible and Ethical Decision-Making A3

Write about and share a principle you want to live by that you learned from a family member, book, movie, or personal experience

LESSON PROCEDURE

Step 1: 

Step 2: 

  • Break students into peer review groups of four. Each student will make and give copies of their essay to the three other students in their group. 
  • Each student will be responsible for reading their classmates’ writing and writing a one-page peer review letter, for each classmate, in advance of the peer review workshop.
  • Peer review guidelines are on the worksheet. 

Step 3: 

  • Spend one class period on peer review. Each student’s writing should have 15 minutes of discussion in the peer review groups.

Step 4: 

  • Students should read all their letters and revise their writing.
  • Students should submit the first draft, all peer review letters, and the second draft to the teacher for feedback.

Step 5: 

  • Students should read teacher feedback, complete a final revision, and  submit the revision—along with all previous drafts and peer review letters—to the teacher for a final grade. 

GRADE 6 UNIT 1 WORKSHEET 4: PEER REVIEW OF DIARY ENTRIES ABOUT OPTIMISM

PEER REVIEW LETTER GUIDELINES:

  • Write a one-page letter for each member of your group.
  • Provide feedback as though you were speaking to the writer or presenter directly. Be kind!
  • In the first paragraph, explain what you see as the writer’s goals for the piece.
  • In the second paragraph, explain what you think the writer did well.
  • In the third paragraph, explain what you think the writer can improve.

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